I really like this. It's easy to tell that you cherish your place where you write, and that's true, everyone does need their own quiet, special place for themselves.
I love the way your words flow. It has that simplistic manner and everything ties together. It's all a solid thought and the meaning is clear.
"Words flow onto paper
like the water across the warm sand." is my favorite line. It's simple, but you can just imagine the picture you are created.
Beautiful poem, I really liked it!
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