I saw some errors. Although it was a very good story. I hope you write a lot more. Maybe you can write more chapters on this, I really enjoyed it. Eventually you could even make book I will make sure to buy everyone of yoru book to share with my family. You are a good writer just needs a bit of improvement.
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