This is very touching, but is also very deep. I think that a haiku was a wise choice and a great topic to write it with. This has so much feeling and emotion, even though it is just three simple short lines. I respect this haiku and would like to read more of your work in the future.
hello, this poem is very well written and make a lot of since to me. i love the way it was written and explains how love is hard, but also can be soft once you find the love of your life. I love the lines where it explains how you could lose your path and you may pay for that mistake or losing what you are going after. I think you did a very good job explaining love and the challenges that love os all about. keep writing and i look forward to reading more.
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