Beautiful! The language is so tender and innocent while the subject matter is emotional and a turning point in a woman's life. I really liked it. It's very honest.
This is really good. I hope there is another installment so I can read on!
I really like the way you have accurately conveyed the sense of undying love Cassidy has for Logan. I think a lot of young girls would be able to identify with the character.
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