Very good story. The content was good and the characters were well defined. It was somewhat hard to follow with some of the adjective and adverbs used. I found myself reading certain sentances a couple of times to make sure I understood what I thought was the intent. I once heard that cliches are something that should seldom be used if ever. Once again, it was a very good story and I thoroughly enjoyed the content.
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