Powerful poem. I liked the way you portrayed the escalation of the girl's downfall. I know someone who is going through this. You are so on target! Good writing.
Wow, you really hit the nail on the head. I, too, have recently lost a loved one, and I can relate to every word that you write. You have explained it perfectly, although those who have never suffered such a loss may not understand the full impact of your words. Keep writing! Share your thoughts and feelings. We can benefit from the,.
I just found your beautiful poem, Blessed Soul. What a lovely tribute to your father. I like how you expressed your admiration for him. I expected to read about sadness, but, instead, read about hopefulness...Charleen
I love "Let me kiss it away!" It made me smile - do you believe in soul mates or is that a myth that was made to help humans love one another? It sounds like new love that could become a long term love, but is okay being new love for now. Great way to express yourself...Charleen
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