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Review by Sal Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wonderful work! Where's episode two?
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Review by Sal Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Finally finished this, and wow... just wow...

This is your baby and it shows. I liked the theme of the "medieval vs modern" man and how at the end Gordy sort of just accepted his place in all of it. Even if it didn't work out for him personally.

Onviously this is very long, but I couldn't think of anything to cut. My one suggestion is to maybe go back and add to the first chapter of this trilogy, it has a markedly differeent writing style than 2 & 3.
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Review by Sal Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Fascinating!

I wasn't sure whether I liked this story until the end.... but loved the twist. It was unexpected and actually kinda chilling.


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