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Review of Foot Job  
Review by Carl
Rated: E | (5.0)
Really cool story - partial to the layout too ;) Personally I haven't been in the mood to write but when I do I'll definitely follow-up on some of the storylines. Some real good ones here!
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Review by Carl
Rated: E | (5.0)
A truly fantastic interactive!!
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Review by Carl
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
An interesting poem. I have mixed feelings regarding the doctrine of prayer. If things (like Revelations) are ordained and will happen and cannot be changed, what use is praying about not letting it happen? Either way interesting writing and I like the use of bold at the end.
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Review by Carl
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good stuff!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
So far so good but it needs more chapters!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Cool start looking to see more of the Mage's order route!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Awesome story you have here!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a really creative story! Not a big furry fan but you made it fun with lots of nice fetish action. :)
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Review by Carl
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good story! Not a huge DBZ fan but I didn't need to be to enjoy the story. :)
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Review of Office Feet  
Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The start of another fantastic story I'm sure! I love the detailed description and cast of characters - well done. :)
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Review by Carl
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
("Did you guys not hear me?" Chelsy declared in disbelief. They weren't even paying attention to her.
Finally, Lori turned around. "What's your problem, Chelsy?" she snapped.
"My PROBLEM?" Chelsy reply hotly, "I tell you, I'm hearing VOICES, Lori! I hear a bunch of voices in my head!"
"You are seriously delusional." Lori concludes with a blank expression on her face.)

I thought this was part was well written. Though I would recommend more space in between sentences.
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good start - looking forward to seeing more.
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very cool idea! The Bunny Girl entries are HOT HOT HOT!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Great story!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
WOW! What a great new story. I loved the slow build up and now the foot domination is starting. I can't wait to read more! :)
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Perfect 10 - I love this story!
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Review of They Can't  
Review by Carl
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Story too short - I want more!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
WOW! This is an amazing story! I really love the slow build up - as a reader its freaking awesome. For me as a writer I don't think I can take that long to build it up so I may just observe this story but again... WOW what an amazing start!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Really love all of the background info.
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is an epic tale... some of the quality that people write isn't that great though. Its cool that so many people have joined in but sometimes its better to edit heavily and restrict what people can do. That's my only nitpick. The fact that it has so many additions is amazing! Great work. :)
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Can't believe I haven't rated this story yet! I love it. Fantastic story with a lot of great options and the author is flexible with what we can do for additions. Can't recommend it enough!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Need to write more!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great story! I hope more people add to it!
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Review by Carl
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is always good to have polls like this to see what other people think. Personally I've read and written stories for EVERY item here! Lets see... going for that 250 character limit, almost there and yup, getting close and her ewe go. 250 characters! :)
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Review of Paranoia  
Review by Carl
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What happens next!!!
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