Awesome event. Congratulations on turning 21. One of my favorite corners of the internet. Thank you both(the mom and pop running the website) and the awesome community for creating and maintaining this beautifully unqiue place
Good one and but i think you can do better.. You should probably describe the characters a bit more..other than that, it was awesome.. Looking forward for your next stories... It's the 1st time i'm reading a script and it felt great :) ..btw thanks for the gift points
really really awesome story.....i have read the story many times and still want to read it more..i specially like the story line of the neighbour girl..if you still come to the site please write more stories like this..it's one of my favorite stories...
it was the first story i had read on this website and it's rally awesome.....i liked every part of it...i wish i continued longer and reached 1000 chapters....please add if you still come online regularly...i want to see some worshiping of temari..
hey nice story there..good work..keep it up....it has gotten pretty long now..
hope it gets longer....best of luck with the writing..please add a few more chapters to the story ..i am looking forward to new chapters.........i would like to see more from you
wow...that was great...did you really do all that??you are one lucky person if you actually had enough courage to do it...or is it just a story??even if it's just a story,it's amazing...you written it really well and also clever idea...the 1st chapter is great
the story is really great and i've been reading it since it started ....
i got a lot of inspiration to write after reading this story..and i really liked the branchings....i can never rate it less than 5.0 ...if the author is still active,i would like to see some more chapters in the anime parts...
hey the story is going great..please add more chapters to the kukkaku story line....it was really awesome....and by the way i would like to see some of tatsuki too if you get free time and you like her too..anyway best of luck with the writing...i just hope the story gets longer
wow..it's a great story and your writing is awesome...the description is really great..i am hoping for more stories from you....hope you become a great writer ..really enjoyed the story...you'll become famous in no time if you keep writing like this or may be you're already famous :)
it's a great story..the writing is really awesome...and also the chapter are very long which make the story even better..hope to see more from you...i'll be looking forward to you next stories.....i wish you will become a very good author..and become famous too :)
oh my god !!i never imagined a story this long existed in this website..it's really huge...it will take days to finish reading..heads of to the author..,,hope the story grows even larger and larger..it's an epic story....and it's almost like a manga..even many manga's dont run for 9 years
it's a really good story...
enjoyed reading so far..and the writing language is really awesome..hope to see more from you...and i wish you'll turn out to be a great author...the thing i like most about the story is the way it's written and also the chapters are long so it feels good to read the story...
it's a a good story......
i enjoyed reading it so far...hope the story continues longer....keep up the good work and also i'd like to see more from you......
any way best of luck for your writing career and hope you turn out to be a good author
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