I really like you story, I am not as good a writer as you but I hope with practice I can be. Wouldn`t it be wonderful if our armforces over seas could have robots like yours,maybe some day they well. your story has good action and holds your interest
Hay, I was your age once and I have for gotten how it feels because I am old enough to be your grand mother , maybe I am your grand mother,just kidding ,I never had any kids BUT if I had I would like to think that he would have been like you , I like you . You know it is O.K. to just sit around fake out life some times ,you know just let the world go by and take notes just don`t forget to live while you are at it .
The monster sounds like a cat fish, sort of , They can get to be very big here in the Marble Falls lake in Texas . A fisherman caught one once that was 60 pounds. If you don`t like catfish change your dream. I liked your story ,it was fun and interesting .Thank you
Hi, I am new at this but I liked your story ,the setting of a plantation ,slaves , advenger, mischife, lady in distress, and hero on a big black horse. Now we have all sorts of problems to be sloved and romance in the future / Your story flows well pulling the reader in and keeping them there.
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