This was an interesting piece, definately different from most of the works I have read out there so far. I like the level of detail you have used, it makes the story come to life and have a spirit of its own. There is a element of startkness here which I also enjoy. Nice job!
I love this, really I do. The emotion converyed here along with the wonderful imagery present works together to create a work of art. This was a joy to read and definately tugged at my heart. There are truths in here that some in our country are blind to but which everyone should be exposed to. Once again, nicely done.
You did a very nice job on this! It is so emotional and touching to read. I like the way it flows so smoothly and conveys its point clearly and in a touching way. I'm not usually a big fan of poetry, but this is an exception for sure! Once again, nicely done!
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