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As a passionate writer and lover of literature, I review books, poems, and other literary works from a personal and insightful perspective. Some critical aspects of my reviews. Empathy and connection: I strive to understand the author's intentions and the underlying themes of the work.Attention to detail: As a writer, I appreciate the nuances of language, style, and structure. I would pay close attention to the author's craft and how it contributes to the overall effectiveness of the piece—support for fellow writers. A focus on the power of words: As a lover of language, I appreciate the ability of literature to evoke emotions, spark ideas, and challenge perspectives.
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Review of Roses  Open in new Window.
Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Roses" is a poignant and evocative poem exploring love, loss, and remembrance themes. Wilson's use of repetition in the first stanza establishes a rhythmic pattern and creates a sense of nostalgia. The lines "She remembered how her husband loved them so" are repeated in each subsequent stanza, anchoring the poem and emphasizing the central theme of the speaker's fond memories of her late husband.
The second stanza delves deeper into the speaker's recollections, focusing on the tender moments she shared with her husband. The image of him placing a rose behind her ear is remarkably evocative, symbolizing their love and affection. The third stanza continues to explore these romantic memories, highlighting the joy and happiness they experienced together.
However, the final stanza introduces a bittersweet note as the speaker places a rose on her husband's grave. This action serves as a poignant reminder of her loss and the enduring nature of her love for him. The poem concludes on a contemplative note, suggesting that the memory of love can provide solace and comfort even in the face of grief.
Wilson's skillful use of language and imagery creates a vivid and emotionally resonant portrait of love and loss. "Roses" is a beautifully crafted poem that will leave a lasting impression on readers—well done.


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Review of Mommy, Mommy  Open in new Window.
Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
"A Child's Prayer to Her Mother" is a poignant exploration of a complex relationship between a mother and daughter. The poem delves into the deep-seated longing for maternal love and acceptance and the pain of feeling unseen and undervalued.
The speaker, a grown child, addresses her mother directly, pleading for her attention and recognition. The child's plea is filled with raw emotion as she expresses her desire to be the "good girl" her mother has always wanted her to be. Rather than being a source of shame, the child's differences are presented as unique qualities that she hopes will make her mother proud.
However, the poem takes a heartbreaking turn as the child reveals that her mother's love has been elusive. The child has come to terms with the fact that she cannot change her mother's rejection, and she is forced to live with the emotional scars it has left. Yet, the final lines of the poem convey a sense of resignation and a determination to move forward, free from the shadow of her mother's disapproval, inspiring the reader with the speaker's resilience.
The poem's strength lies in its ability to capture the universal experience of longing for maternal love and the pain of feeling rejected. The speaker's vulnerability and honesty make the poem deeply relatable, and it is sure to resonate with anyone who has struggled with similar emotions, inviting the reader to connect with the speaker's experience. Thank you.


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Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
King Herod's Love Song is a chilling exploration of the dangerous consequences of unchecked power and the corruption of the human spirit. Written from Herod's perspective, the poem offers a glimpse into the mind of a tyrant.
Herod's initial self-assuredness quickly gives way to a sense of desperation and entitlement. His promise to grant his beloved any wish, no matter how outrageous, is a testament to his arrogance and belief in his invincibility.
The poem's true horror lies in the stark contrast between Herod's professed love and his willingness to commit acts of brutality to protect his ego. John the Baptist's fate serves as a chilling reminder of the lengths to which power can drive individuals.
While the poem is written from Herod's perspective, it ultimately serves as a cautionary tale about the dangers of unchecked authority and the importance of compassion and morality. This emphasis on the cautionary nature of the poem is intended to make the audience feel warned and enlightened?


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Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
This lighthearted poem captures the frustration and disappointment of a lost Christmas gift. The author's vivid description of their cozy holiday setting contrasts with the chaos and frustration of dealing with a lost package. The humorous tone and self-deprecating humor make this a relatable and enjoyable read. While the situation may be frustrating, the author's positive outlook and promise to make it up to the recipient offer hope for a happy ending. Well done.


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Review of Something Clicked  Open in new Window.
Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This delightful short story combines humor, personal anecdotes, and a touch of adventure.
The author's self-deprecating humor about their weight and fitness level is relatable and endearing. The contrasting experiences of the leisurely buggy ride and the challenging hike create a humorous dynamic.
The obsession with postmarks adds a unique and interesting element to the story, providing a glimpse into a lesser-known hobby. The interaction with the young post office clerk is particularly heartwarming, showcasing the kindness and resourcefulness of strangers.
Overall, this story is a charming and enjoyable read that celebrates the joy of exploration and the value of human connection. Well done.


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Review of BARTER  Open in new Window.
Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
This poem offers a thought-provoking commentary on economic inequality and the power dynamics inherent in trade.
The contrasting images of those who till the land and those who buy and sell highlight the disparities in labor and wealth. The poem suggests that while one group toils to provide sustenance, the other benefits financially from their efforts.
The lines "The former have to sweat it out, the latter have pleasures" emphasize the imbalance of power. The notion that bartering labor for money is seen as a favor to those with wealth further underscores this inequality.
While the poem doesn't explicitly advocate for a particular economic system, it raises important questions about the distribution of resources and the value placed on different types of labor. Well done.


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Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The imagery of a garden by a river, surrounded by willow trees, creates a peaceful and idyllic scene. The mention of a "magic spell" adds a touch of enchantment, suggesting a place where healing can occur.
The lines "Healing souls and hearts with the sun's light" convey the idea that the garden offers a sense of solace and renewal. The notion that time stands still in this place emphasizes its ability to provide a respite from the hustle and bustle of everyday life.
Overall, this poem is a lovely tribute to the healing power of nature. It captures the essence of a serene sanctuary where one can find peace and rejuvenation. Well Done.


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Review of It Isn't Safe  Open in new Window.
Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This poem delves into themes of resilience, strength, and the human spirit's ability to endure hardship.
The speaker acknowledges the dangers of their situation but expresses unwavering determination. They emphasize their inner strength and ability to overcome challenges. The metaphor of bending with the storm beautifully conveys their resilience.
The poem also touches on the importance of support and belonging. The speaker seeks a safe haven where they can be themselves and feel supported. While their family may not be perfect, they find strength in their own ability to stand and see.
The final lines offer a glimmer of hope, suggesting that despite the current dangers, the speaker envisions a brighter future. Overall, this is a powerful and poignant piece that resonates with themes of perseverance and the human spirit's capacity for growth and transformation. Well done.


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Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Strychnine,
Thank you for sharing your insights on these pressing societal issues. Your observations about the pressures faced by children and the shortcomings of our educational systems are certainly worthy of consideration.
Your points about the harmful effects of social media on young people, the unrealistic expectations placed on individuals, and the need for better protection of students from abuse are particularly poignant. The anecdotes you've shared about dress codes and teacher misconduct highlight the inconsistencies and injustices that can occur within our institutions.
It's important to acknowledge that while these issues may seem overwhelming, there are individuals and organizations working tirelessly to address them. There are schools and communities that prioritize mental health support, promote body positivity, and strive to create safe learning environments for all students.
I believe that by raising awareness and fostering open dialogue, we can collectively work towards creating a more equitable and supportive society. It's encouraging to see individuals like yourself taking the initiative to shed light on these important issues.
Thank you again for your thoughtful contribution.


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Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
A Nocturnal Tapestry
"Flight of the Zanates" paints a vivid picture of a twilight scene, capturing the melancholic beauty of the fading light and the eerie presence of vultures perched on the cathedral spires. The image of the moon hovering over the cathedral, cloaked in darkness, creates a sense of foreboding and mystery.
The zanates, with their black wings swirling in the twilight, add to the somber atmosphere. The lone whistle of a bird amidst the quiet creates a momentary break in the stillness, followed by the awakening of the night lights.
The contrast between the young man, oblivious to his surroundings, and the family strolling by highlights the disconnect between individuals in the modern world. The orange eye blinking from the car adds a touch of intrigue and suspense.
The poem's exploration of the slow pace of life in the country is thought-provoking, contrasting it with the frenetic pace of urban life. The mention of the Tico beat and the ubiquitous presence of weed adds a layer of cultural specificity.
Overall, "Flight of the Zanates" is a beautifully crafted story that captures the essence of a twilight scene and invites the reader to contemplate the complexities of human nature and the rhythms of life. The imagery is vivid, the language is evocative, and the themes are thought-provoking. Well done.


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Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
A Poem of Love and Resilience
"Embrace the Light" is a poignant poem that explores themes of love, loss, and the enduring power of human connection. The speaker's acknowledgment of their fear of the dark and their determination to avoid strife highlights their resilience and their commitment to their relationship.
The central message of the poem is the importance of embracing the light, both literally and figuratively. The speaker's reference to his wife as the "center of his life" emphasizes the profound impact she has on him. The couple's shared fear of the dark suggests a deep bond and a mutual understanding of their vulnerabilities.
The poem's tone is both hopeful and melancholic, reflecting the complexities of life and the bittersweet nature of human experience. The mention of "balancing work life" suggests the challenges of maintaining a healthy relationship while navigating the demands of everyday life.
Overall, "Embrace the Light" is a beautifully crafted poem that captures the essence of love, resilience, and the enduring power of human connection. Well done.


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Review of Island  Open in new Window.
Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
A Tropical Paradise
The name "Island" conjures up images of sun, sand, and serenity. It's a name that evokes a sense of warmth, relaxation, and escape.
The comparison to honey and berries is particularly apt, as it suggests a sweetness and natural beauty. Hair that's wavy like ocean water adds to the tropical theme, while a personality warmer than the sun implies a cheerful and inviting disposition.
The metaphor of a voice like an angel is a powerful one, suggesting a beautiful and soothing quality. Finally, the comparison of skin to silk and a smile to red bottoms conveys a sense of luxury and sophistication.
Overall, the name "Island" is a fitting choice for someone who embodies the qualities of a tropical paradise: warmth, beauty, and a sense of escape. Well done.


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Review of Encaustic  Open in new Window.
Review by Sabrina Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A Sensory Experience.
"Encaustic" is a captivating poem that invites the reader into a world of sensory details and evocative imagery. The speaker's transformation from winter to spring is palpable, as the greening scent of spring creeps under their skin and perfumes them with violets and moss.
The use of encaustic as a metaphor for the poem's themes is particularly effective. Encaustic painting is a technique that involves using heated wax and pigments, creating a rich, textured surface. Similarly, the poem's language is rich and textured, full of vivid imagery and sensory details.
The reference to the "tiny tree frog" glowing in memory adds a touch of whimsy and wonder to the poem. It suggests a connection to nature and a sense of wonder at the beauty of the world.
Overall, "Encaustic" is a beautifully crafted poem that captures the essence of spring and the transformative power of nature. The use of encaustic as a metaphor is both clever and effective, adding depth and richness to the poem's themes. Well done.


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