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Review by Ruby Red Misfit Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought this was very good. I like the flow of the poem. This subject really speaks to me as I can relate. Actually it hits very close to home. I witnessed someone get hit by a car unfortunately they didn't live through it. The way you describe the incident is very real and moving.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed reading this short fictional piece. I like your descriptiveness and the way you tell the story as it almost reminds me of a Twilight Zone type of tale. I also liked the surprise at the end as it turns out the characters are mere bugs.
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