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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this, it was really sweet. I didn't really like how the line "the ether of forever" sounds with the rest of the poem, but that's more of a personal preference than an actual literary complaint. But I liked the "miracle born but this miracle to me," I thought it was a really clever description. Anyway, great job!
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