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Review of The Note...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Cute little story. Hope Johnny is interested in June as well as her cupcake!
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Review of The Waiting Game  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poor old Bert is in for a nasty surprise but I don't think Ray'll be that shocked. Nice twist at the end.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting twist on the concept. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Bird  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fun story - love the idea of a Birds' Picnic!
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Nice build up of tension and I like the open ending. A rather large part of me hopes that natural justice is served!
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Review of Doing as You Say  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*hears the penny drop* They all get there eventually, don't they? Really glad the daughter shared how she felt.
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Review of June 14--Gun  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a really good piece - so much pain and frustration for your heroine and then one day she's truly free. I can feel her relief.

Just a thought - there's a webzine called Shotgun Honey that specialises in noir fiction. I think they'd love your work (they published one of mine and crime fiction isn't really my 'thing'!).
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
A nice, compact little story. I'm glad the narrator got his own back!

One thing - putting a space between your paragraphs makes them easier to read.
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Review of Hit and Run  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very interesting piece - good description of the same event seen through different eyes.
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Review of Always a Victim  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Absolutely terrifying! Great work.
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