Hoping you did not get tired of me Lovely poem, it reminded so much of my own pain. I hope you only wrote it but did not go through in real as i know how painful it is to.
By " A night without moon or starts," I think you meant stars, you may want to correct the misspelling.
Firstly i would like to thank you for advising me to read about Shannon's Gift. I honestly admit that I could not realize how i rolled down the mouse nor the sentences, all i remember is how hurry i read the story as i imagined it in my mind. It was like seeing the scenes, very vivid. I gasped and i raised my hand to my mouth when i read the sentences "She was hit by a car". And I felt your shock when you found out about the the Doctor who was once that man lost in despite.
I am so happy that your beautiful Shannon is fine and i thank God for it.
Once again i am proved that all the good deeds are rewarded if not in this world in the other.
Thank you once again for sharing this amazing story with me.
Very touching and intensive poem! I like the way you alter the love and feelings in the stanzas.
We will never loose our dear ones, you know they will always remain. And just like you said, there will be a day when we all will gather together again.
This poem confused me alittle. But if every line was individual than it would be making more sense to me. However this might me a way you chose for this poem.
I found it very sweet and warm. It reminded me of my friends, the ones used to be very close, i hate to admit that sometimes the bond doesn't last forever but love deep in your heart stays.
"Each day I tell myself that life is not worth living any more"
Everything happens for a reason. And living this life is worth it, good or bad, knowing that every good intention & every hard time you go through, will be rewarded.
Patience is the key.
Smile,
Rose
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Lovely poem, it reminded so much of my own pain. I hope you only wrote it but did not go through in real as i know how painful it is to.
