Okay, a day later and I'm finally finishing this great "little" story you have put together. The twists and turns are unexpected, and perhaps it is exactly what has kept my interest in the story. It moves along at a great pace, never a dull moment. My head is still spinning from all the action and turns of fate. You have done a remarkable job with this story. I will have to come back later and read some of your other stuff. Keep up the great writing and thanks for the encouragement of my own.
Again, this is a great continuation of the first two quarters of this story. I'm glad to have taken the time to read them. The fourth quarter will have to wait for a day or so. Thanks again for sharing your story with the rest of us. I look forward to finishing the story later on today, or tomorrow.
I really liked this story and I'm glad I took the time to read it. It flowed together very well for the most part. I only saw one or two small typo's for the entire piece, something a spell-checker would not catch. I enjoyed the twists and unexpected events. The descriptions were very good and well thought out. I don't think I have the talent, or imagination to accomplish the story-line you have devoloped. I guess that is why I'm a fan of the sci-fi/fantasy genres. Thanks for the writing and sharing it with us, keep up the great work.
Great information to take serious note of. As a new author, I'm glad that this kind of information is available to me and how to protect myself as well. Thanks for the information.
Roscoe
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