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Review by Jason Ronin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
this poem evokes memories of times past and times yet to come, eight lines that say so much and yet leave so much untold, well written can not see anything wrong with it well done keep it up.
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Review by Jason Ronin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked this piece. It reminded me of early Alan Dean Foster.Good pace to it,I actually believed in each character and the universe they inhabited.One niggle I had is the seahorse comment it seemed out of place, would seahorses exist on other worlds, just a thought.
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