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Review of The Time Machine  Open in new Window.
Review by Rosko Tzolov Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi. This is a good start of a longer story. You should definitely continue it. I would be interested to read it. I just hope that you change the font color and insert spaces between the paragraphs as the way they are now it's a bit hard to read. :)
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Review by Rosko Tzolov Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi. I like your small story a lot. Especially the description of the kitchen. It's very vivid. My only remark is - I don't know if it's just me, but all the names start with R and it confuses me a bit. Maybe you meant it to be so.
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Review of A Haunted Memoir  Open in new Window.
Review by Rosko Tzolov Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi. I like your story. It seems as if itis nonfiction, but who knows. It builds up the atmosphere. I guess if you intended you could have made it really scary - something about the doll, or his dreams, or whatever but as it is the ending is still pretty satisfying. I also very much liked your style and the pace of the story. It flowed nicely.
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