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Review by Robert McGinley Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent work! I thoroughly enjoyed your tale in its rhythmic delivery. I enjoyed the continuity of your heroic poem and didn't feel any forced words out of context just to complete a rhyming scheme. Well thought out.
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Review by Robert McGinley Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Thanks for sharing your memories. I'm glad you were able to say your goodbye to pap-pap. Diabetes is truly a terrible disease and I am glad you and your sister were able to spend quality time with him and were afforded closure. Your story brought to mind fond memories of my own pop-pop. Well done, you've reached this reader with your heart felt story.
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