That was the most amazing hart-wrenching thing I've ever read. I can't believe you put it into words. My grandfather has had dementia since I was very little. I've visited him almost every day since fourth grade so this hit pretty close to home. I don't know if this story is true, but you wrote it very well. Amazing job! keep up the good work!
THAT WAS AMAZING!!! The way you repeated the words to show her madness from being alone was extremely well thought out. The god with no eyes was a little confusing, but sounds really cool! I know that this is from three years ago, but keep up the good work!
xoxo Purple Rose
Your story's intro immediately grasped my attention! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I am very excited to see what happens next! The way you choose to describe what is happening is very appealing and I can almost imagine what it happening! The names you chose are also very eye catching and interesting. I too enjoy choosing names you do not see very often. Readers usually enjoy the variety of names. Keep up the good work!
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