First of all, Fran,
I love the sensual appeal of roses and the warming imagery they convey.
What deeper pleasure or greater hope could a love poem express than that it will last a lifetime … simply beautiful.
The rhyme scheme, word choices and arrangements, and the deft use of quatrains led a flow that smooth and easy to enjoy … you've shared so much in a minimal of verses that touched the mind, heart, and soul.
A virtual little masterpiece of enthrallment, you stirred my sense very nicely … big hug of thanks to you! ⁓ Richard
Simply enthralling poetry, Sara, penned in a smooth and easy style that embraces ones emotional feeling of kindness and nostalgic imagery in a truly fetching way few can.
Bless you for sharing your uniquely beautiful skills and knack for touching the heart ever-so gently … warmest hugs! ~ Richard
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