Hello fellow writer,
I am giving 5 stars because this piece is one of the best poems I have read about spring. The poem went into detail about the feelings, excitement and the kind of weather in the season. Personally I enjoy the winter, but this poem has spread some light on spring in my eyes.
1. This written piece you have composed is truly beautiful. Beautiful in a way I can't form a sentence to explain. Your essay has went into detail and expression simply about the profound feeling of death and the things it can do to a person.
2. " I am hated by almost everyone and cursed everywhere I go." + "and perhaps this time I’ll understand what love is." Another reason I am giving you 5 stars is because I can relate to you. Nothing but grief, resentment and fears have trailed along with me. I am still learning and growing as a person to understand why I am having such feelings. Until then I keep my head down and sulk.
Personally, I hate when people who cannot relate to me tell me that I am not alone. And I'm not sure if you feel the same way. But I am saying I felt some kind of comfort from your essay in ways I wouldn't with anyone else.
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