A greatly written story! The flow was great, the characters had depth (somewhat) but it was a good story. But what I loved the most, however, was the ending. "hummmmm... what's that sound?" That was hilarious! And the thing I like about the ending is that it wasn't a complete cliffhanger. It was enough to let your imagination fun wild, but not enough to make me feel like "Wait. That's it?!? WHAT!?!" It was the perfect balance. KEEP WRITING!! :D
That was a great piece. I could see it; it had great imagery. It also connected with me. I could feel it so much, it was like....I was there. I enjoyed it a lot.
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