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Review of Cyber Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is different I didnt expect it to end that way, I was on the edge of my seat wondering what would happen next and to me that is good writting. I like it and keep up the good work, you should continue it and turn it into a book but, leave that part about the killing of the people towards the end build up suspense through out the book or have people starting to disappear slowly. Its up to you but, I personally think its great.


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Review of Day and Night  Open in new Window.
Review by nelly Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very good
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