It was really good, a fantasy comedy and love story. It also is very original, which is a great plus. The first few paragraphs though are a little off for me, with the constant mentioning of the Wil, Will, Will. But the story picks up and right at the middle I was hooked. Thank you so much for such a delightful read. I'm now a fan!
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