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28 Public Reviews Given
29 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I tend to be more character aimed when I review.I am not active on Saturday so don't ask on that day please.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Mystery, Comedy, Sci-fi
Least Favorite Genres
Erotica, Horror, dark, apocalyptic, and zombies.
Favorite Item Types
Chapters, book items, short stories, and of course poetry.
Least Favorite Item Types
Campfire,Blogs
I will not review...
Erotica and anything listed in my least favourite genres. I'm not keen on anything 18+ either.
Public Reviews
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Review by Moira So busy!~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I don't claim to be an awesome reviewer. I'm just telling you what I think. I hope to be encouraging and give you something that will actually help your writing.

*Key2* First Impressions:
She needs to be her absolute best for the party but she doesn't seem to realize death has all ready taken her.

*CheckG* My Favorite Elements:
This woman appears to be a ghost which is kind of creepy.

*Pencil* Suggestions:
A sequel perhaps? Maybe she finds a way to actually make people see her? Suggestions of course.

*GiftG* Overall:
It seemed like she was having a very realistic nightmare. Scary!~
It also had a rushed feel to it, although that is probably what you intended.

Never give up!

~Moira

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Review by Moira So busy!~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job!
Just remember not to overuse the words 'was' and 'had'. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing and hope to read more. =)

Sincerely Redeagles51.(Moira)
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