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Review of BUTTERFLY WINGS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery of butterfly wings and rose petals to represent the beauty in the world. You paint a gorgeous picture of how a broken world may be fixed. I love it.
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Review of Bricks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is so good. I love the extended metaphor and the irony of the common brick layer being so wise.
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Review of Our Moment  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like how you put the reader right into the moment with descriptions that draw them in. I would suggest that maybe you give a little bit more plot, like telling how the two characters got together and what demons were in the narrator's past. This is a very mature and educated writing style, though. I like your word choices and sentence structure, very well written.
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