Your poetic style is reminescient of Roger Waters (of Pink Floyd) in passion and wit.
My favorite stanze:
A bad taste from the Industrial Age,
Now Mother Earth screams out in blinding rage.
On gross profits you seem to depend,
But it's close to end-here comes Earth's revenge.
That was pretty cool. I like the comparison between writting and cooking. Got a thing: should "Notepade chopping block" have been "Notepad chopping block?"
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