excellently done! I really enjoyed the whole "nostalgia" feel of the poem; makes me wish I could be home right now! The one thing I really appreciate the most the fact that your rhyming was so tasteful. I've read many a poem with similar content as yours and they come across as cheesy and over-the-top. Yours, on the other hand, created a beautiful picture in my mind and kept me reading and interested. bravo!
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