Great poem. I felt it the whole way. The presence of a significant other really takes a toll on the spirit. Grammatically, you should know you're mistakes for this poem seems unfinished. Also, I wish the ending gave readers a little more insight, a little more of a finished feeling. Keep on writing and check some of my stuff out!
A very relatable topic. I guarantee you that every single soul experiences this feeling some time in their life, particularly the younger generation. Your poem is pure and heart-filled. Keep up the good writing.
Oh my god the suspense. I really had fun reading this. I had no idea what was going on at first (hence the title Chapter 2) ,but I didn't care. This is good writing. I would love to be updated and posted as to when the next chapters come out. I need to know the man in the mask!
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