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Review of Milk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This was an interesting story, I liked the originality of it also. So is he a vampire or a cannibal? Couldn't really tell which. The only problem I had with the story was your refrence to 'Pagans', as pagan garbage. If this guy believes in vampires/demons/cannibals, whatever, why wouldn't he believe in witchcraft also? Just curious as your thoughts on that. Take care and Blessed Be!
Raven:)

Check out my story: Wicked Summer. Would like to know your opinion.
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Review of Sandcastles  Open in new Window.
Review by Raven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi there. I've just joined this site, but have been giving crits for awhile now.


First off, I have to say that as a mother, I found this to be very disturbing. Not that it is a bad thing, per say. I think your story took a look into the mind of a pedaphile, how their mind works. It's a very original outlook, I've never read anything like it. Which makes it a great story. Keep writing, you have talent.

Take care and Blessed Be!
Raven :)
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