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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
It made me think. It was a semi original story and I could tell it was very thought out. The only thing I could pick out that was wrong was that I have read a short story involving a fun house before and that was what I thought of the whole time. Maybe if you wouldve used a diffrent location it may have added more. Very good all the way around though.


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