very good . its has imagery and very descriptive words. i like the line "A firework going through my heart.
Hearts together like they were meant to be, just you and I" ... i thought it was very good and related to me in dome type of way. overall i really like your poem nd keep writing !
i realy think this was good. It had good choice of words and very good imagery. you explained it well , and used very good details. your a very good writer.
I really liked your poem. I saaw all 5 senses. i can really see what your saying. it could be a little longer , but overall it was a very awesome poem!
I think it's a very good poem. I can really relate to this poem because sometimes i feel this way to. It was a great choice of words and i could picture how and what was going on with the situation. I also think to help other people to understand a little more to put who was holding you back and why. Overall I really liked it, it was very good.
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