very nice poem. The rhyme scheme hardly made any difference to the sound grammar incorporated into the poem. While ambiguous language does often improve the charm and appeal of poetry, this poem accomplishes the same through its simplicity and the sincerity of the plea of the child within this poem.
It also brings to light how much children in orphanages hunger for love; that despite being provided with food clothing and shelter, they are deprived of the one thing that children most yearn for and need; attention.
Marvellous. I just didn't give it a 5 rating beacause I would be telling the author to stop looking for ways to improve himself/herself. And it would hardly do to hamper such calibre.
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