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Rated: E | (2.5)
I don't see it winning any awards but I think i get the message. This actually reminds me of a music video i saw on tv once honestly.. but I suppose that doesn't demeen it by any means, maybe make it a bit longer; extrapolate on character history perhaps? anywho, keep up the good work
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