Amazing, heart felt story. I honestly was brought to tears by the emotion that filled every word. I feel sorry for this character, real or not, and what she is going through. Very impressive.
I am greatly impressed. From writer to writer, the imagination and theory you put into this writing was absolutely amazing. I had never even thought of an event like this possibly happening. I use technology more than I realize, as does most of our civilization. I understand completely what the story was behind this, and I believe, please don't judge, that this should be a movie. I can just picture every moment in my head. I hope you get published soon, if you aren't already. Thank you for the best read I've had all year.
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