I really like this poem! I can completely sympathize with you, and your tone is clear and invoking. I enjoyed the last line because you give the reader something to think about. The only criticism I have is that sometimes it doesn't flow just right.
Would you mind reading mine? http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1913...
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