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Review by quinlangal Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This spoke to me. I am a used to be smoker. It took me getting really sick to quit. Every smoker needs to read this. Great Work!
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Review by quinlangal Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow, Oh Wow! This is an awesome inspirational story. I hung on every word that you wrote. I am blessed to come across your story. You should attempt to get this published. You have a gift in your writing. Keep up the awesome work.

Happy Writing,
Peggy
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I really enjoyed your story. I can remember what it was like at the end of summer vacation. Your story is very believable. I believe that this could truly happen between two friends. Keep up the good work!
Happy Writing,
Peggy
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I loved your story! I love that Chester turned out to be a cat, what a twist. Keep up the good work. !

Happy Writing,
Peggy
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Your story is very heartwarming. Your cat did not react in the way I thought a cat would react. When I was a teenage, I had a cat that I bathed and I ended up scratched. I really did enjoy your story. My advice is to read your story out loud to yourself. I find that when I read what I have written out loud I can spot mistakes. For example the 3rd sentence from the end. "By this washing was over." Was it supposed to be But, this washing was over.
I hope this helps. I look forward to reading more of your writing! Keep up the good work.
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