i liked it. to me it shows a relationship between father and son that was not strong but in the end it turns out to be a little closer than before. you should make a continuation. i would love to read more of your work. keep on writing and hope to read more of your stuff really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This poem was soooooooooooooooooo beautiful to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It really touched my heart in a way I never thought possible. Keep on writing, and never lose hope. I hope to be seeing more and more stories, poems, and maybe even books or novels in the near furture. And remember keep writing.
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It may seem short, but I wouldn't underestimate the poem. It really got me thinking and wondering what does it really mean to be me. Some people may not know it, but I believe that if they read this poem they will be deeply effected like I was. Keep on writing!! I would love to read more of your work in the very near future!!!!!!!
I love the idea. You should write it no matter what people think or say. In the long run you might even get it published, you never know. So I say just write it, i'll read it, and i'll review it. I think it will turn out great.
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