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Review by Joshua D. Vesper Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'm intrigued by this story. Great job!
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Review by Joshua D. Vesper Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is really really good.
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Review by Joshua D. Vesper Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
this is a pretty cool opening. It's like Starwars, Lord of the rings, and greek and roman mythology all rolled into one. An idea for you to do now is maybe switch views for your next chapter or so and show maybe what the badguys are doing? its just a suggestion.
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