This poem was lovely to read. Your prose felt like a conversation, just with the way it danced and spun. I adore the way you expressed ice and really put emotion behind it. The repetition of the title also wrapped your piece up into a nice little bow. All in all, beautiful job!
The poem was incredibly well written! Each line flows perfectly into each other and you used the poem's form to your advantage. I adored the references and comparatives to magic and magicians; it really it conveys your emotions well and offers a fun visual. Also, the tone change in the last stanza was perfect and hit really hard. Incredible job!
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