This poem was lovely to read. Your prose felt like a conversation, just with the way it danced and spun. I adore the way you expressed ice and really put emotion behind it. The repetition of the title also wrapped your piece up into a nice little bow. All in all, beautiful job!
This poem was honestly the perfect thing for to read for the Halloween season! Your vivid details thrown throughout your prose were incredible and made my reading experience so much fun. You truly used the form you chose to your advantage and I applaud you for that!
On top of that, your prose flowed beautifully. The only thing that I noticed was that your third stanza kind of felt clunky to read. Although, fixing that is really tricky especially with the form you chose, so it's no big deal whatsoever.
All in all, you did a phenomenal job at creating a vivid scene and such an amazing read! I hope you have a lovely day!
The poem was incredibly well written! Each line flows perfectly into each other and you used the poem's form to your advantage. I adored the references and comparatives to magic and magicians; it really it conveys your emotions well and offers a fun visual. Also, the tone change in the last stanza was perfect and hit really hard. Incredible job!
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