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Review of Mad Girl  Open in new Window.
Review by TigerLilly|... Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
There were no mistakes as far as punctuation and capitalization. Spelling had no mistakes either. I loved the line that says "A home filled with treasures such as freedom and dreams." This was a great poem. I hope you can write more like this one. The reason I gave you 5.0 was because I liked the poem and there were no errors.
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Review of Whisper Of A Name  Open in new Window.
Review by TigerLilly|... Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved it! There is nothing that you need to correct as far as capitalization, punctuation, and spelling. It was a nice story. I like the parts,"It was then that I remembered the whisper of the name, it was silent, it was sweet." This is such a great story. Great job!
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Review of Friends  Open in new Window.
Review by TigerLilly|... Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I know I reviewed you a few hours ago but I found this one and thought about what I wanted to read. I looked at the discription and went to it. Again there is nothing wrong with it. Punctuation is right and capitalization. You could make your way to the top in no time!
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Review of Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can tell this is 100% true. There were no mistakes in capitalization or punctuation. It was perfect. It all rhymed very good like a poem should. I just wish that people would be this good usually I have to give people a two or three star rating but on yours, It was perfect. No need to change it.
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Review of A Solitary Cloud  Open in new Window.
Review by TigerLilly|... Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great I can picture what all of the parts would look like if they were a picture. I hope you can write a lot more poetry. I could just picture it in my mind. It's a very good poem, I encourage you to right more!!! I hope people think it is as good as I think it is.
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Review of The Sound  Open in new Window.
Review by TigerLilly|... Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Cool story! So far I don't see anything wrong with it. Punctuation was right. Capitalization, good. I think it was great. It was a long story compared to what I've reviewed so far. But I really wonder what the sound was though. It was all just mixed up sounds. It makes me wonder... That's what's good about it!
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Review by TigerLilly|... Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I think that it was very good, the three letter words helped the story stand out. One thing that was hard to understand were the big words like "lethargy". But together I thought it was great! It was nice hearing about rain, we have none where I live :( . The part where you talk about the children was nice. I loved it!
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