WOW! I have been gone for too long! This is the very 1st auction I have looked at since returning. I had forgotten all the cool things that can be bid on. I used to get in on these all the time, and I loved it! I do hope to be able to get my auction feet wet once again! It's been soooo long, I don't know if I remember how to even do this again! The packages look awesome! It's good to be back. I have missed so much, especially the auctions!!!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
This is such an outstanding piece of poetic pie. I could have the whole pie! You have wonderful imagery and such tasteful flair. I think that your descriptive mind soars with the angels! I know soooo many women that would be truly touched by this poem. For so many of us are taken advantage of in one way or another. You have made me proud to be of the female species! I enjoyed each and every word, and I wouldn't change a single thing. I have NOTHING bad to comment on. WRITE ON MY POETIC FRIEND!! fOR IT LOOKS SOO GOOD ON YOU!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY :)
I have been gone off the site for awhile now due to severe life changes in my life. I would like to donate gp's for the auction. There are sooooo many folks on the site that have helped me to get back up and running. My thanx to every single one of them. They know who they are! Thank you guys!!!!!!!!!!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
A lovely and inviting tale you are spinning here! I adore your brilliany imagery pattern and vocabulary. The one part about the rat made me chuckle. I think this is going to be one mighty fine piece. The characters are all very true to life in my opinion. I like the easy flow and understandable conversation. My kinda read! NICELY DONE!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
What an enjoyable penning you have here. Wonderful imagery, and the characters are truly impressive. I love how you have worked the language. At first, I was a little bored, but as I read on the story began to make sense. Y ou have truly inspired me to maybe write one myself! I am a poet, so that's what I normally tend to read. I just happened to run across your piece, and I loved it. Keep up the good work, and drop by and see me if you ever get the time!
POETDONTKNOWIT
Situations such as this are ones that will truly drive one to sheer madness. I guess I am literally old school when it comes to keeping things so I won't lose them. The ole pencil and paper routine for me, for I just do not trust this stupid piece of junk to keep my treasured pennings in it's brain.
I really enjoyed reading your piece Your way of writing is very easy to understand. And, I do hope that you get to the reason that you wound up in solitary confinement in the first place, for, I know how that feels. Enough said bout that!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
Journaling your problems is one of the best therapies, or so they say. I think it is great that you can write about this. I think the quality of your letter is awesome. It takes a lot of courage to ask for others opinions on your situation. I for one, wear my feelings on my sleeve, so my feeling would have been devastated over this also. But,,,, you do have only one dad, and after losing mine in 1976, I would give ANYTHING to just be able to argue with him! I think you should apologize, just for your own sake. I promise that you will be truly blessed for your gesture! Fine write!!!!!!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
WOW! Sooo many bidders in this one! A lot going on at the very last minute! Only my second auction ever! So it's a bit exciting as the clock ticks down! And all for such a great cause. I wish all the winners congrats! YEEE HAW FUN, FUN!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
I just thought I would drop by and check out the unfamilar form you put under your title. Actually, I read your piece first, and thought that it was really good, but sounded a bit choppy as I read it. Then, I saw triquatrain, and thought, hmmm, that must be the way it's supposed to sound! I like the imagery very much. A+ I've learned something new today, and all from you! Drop by, if you ever get bored, and see me!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
So true, my fellow poet! What a stunning little gem, that speaks mounds of truth about some folks feelings when they are under the influence of anything mind altering. Your style is quite priceless. I think it's divine when a poet can say so much, in so few words. You got your point across, to me, brilliantly. A+ Stop by and see me!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
HMM, I think I feel some romantic flair stirring up here! And, just as I said about your first chapter, I knew that your imagery grandness, would repeat itself over and over, and boy, was I correct in that assumption! The descriptiveness about the benadryl was "write" on!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
I like how you jumped right in there on this write. Superb imagery throughout the entire piece. Such fine detailing in everything. You have an awesome, artistic flair for this. It is shown tremendously. I am a stickler for superb imagery, and you FOR SURE, have stickled my fancy here. And, I know that the other chapters will have the very same effect! NICE!
POETDONTKNOWIT
THE YEAR ROUND FIRECRACKER
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
I enjoyed reading your fine piece. You appear to be t-totally sad with this one. The thing that stands out with me, is your line about arguing, and what you wrote about the teenage state of mind. I just can't put my finger on what you are actually getting at. I hope you don't think I am being rude, for that's not my style AT ALL! I have two daughters twenty seven, and twenty one, and we seem to disagree about anything, and everything.Just in the way you have penned your tale, I'm thinking that you are a lot like me. I also like to walk in the rain, it clears, or seems to, my thought process, if that's even possible!lol
All in all, I think you have done an eggcelent job on this one. It keeps the reader wondering, or it did this one!
POETDONTKNOWIT
THE YEAR ROUND FIRECRACKER
I salute you on finding your inner strength in this so carefully penned piece. You tell a tale of sadness, then BAM, the last stanza just explains it all! Lovely, endearing write. It is one that is like eating oatmeal, it sure sticks to your ribs. A piece not easily forgotten!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
I simply ADORE this little piece of poetic pie that you have baked up here. Each and every member should try a bite, I know that they would love it!
I found no spelling errors, but I did find one beautiful write full of delicate imagery.
The concept is outstanding.
I also like the rhyming style. If I were you, I would be so very proud of this write! And for your poetic pie, I would LOVE to have another piece, and can't wait for you to bake another one!!!!! Stop by and see me, we'll eat pie!!!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER WAY
I totally agree! I wear mine also, and feel like if I clean out my closet, I shall also lose my memories! Awesome penning. I love your detail. Also, your imagery and vocabulary are of the finest in the land. Being an avid fan of classic rock, I see that you are by no doubt my twin. Writing about such a cool memory has made me wander back through every concert that I ever attended. Thanks for taking me back in time.
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER WAY
This is just what I have been wanting to do since I joined the site. I am still a newbie, and have been looking for a survey about the site, and BAM, there it was! Thank you for letting us give our input about this wonderful site. The questions are easy to understand, a blast to answer. My carpal tunnel is screaming now! lol A fun surprise for me this boring summer morning!
POETDONTKNOWIT
PENNING IT HER OWN WAY
OK, I must be honest, this is FOR SURE my favorite penning that I have read of yours. Same outstanding detail and imagery. Also, the vocabulary is mighty fine! What a fine penner you are, Unmei! Each one of your pieces are so different, yet hauntingly familiar. I had a blast reading and reviewing your port items. You deserve much recognition for your artistic flair. MUCH!!!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER WAY
Another unque write! I love Halloween. I think this one is way up there also. As I keep reading your poetry, It gets better and better, and BETTER! I think the title is just eggcelent, and again, your imagery ability shines through perfectly. Also, such a huge message in just a few words, but that's actually the way I like it, short, brilliant, and straight to the point, As the bell tolls.
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
What a sweet idea. I adore the part about the gold falling from heaven. I had a friend pass away, and I still write her poetry. I am going to try to get one engraved on her tombstone. Anyway, I'm so sorry about your loss. I could feel in eac and every word, how much you must have cared for this person. I'm sure your friend fluttered angel wings over this fine penning. Don't be sad, GOD LOVES YOU!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER WAY
HEEHEEE This is freakin heeelarious! I know that this is a serious issue, the Homeland Security and all, but making fun of it just helps keep my nervousness under control. For, like you, I like to feed into the comedic sides of serious situations. Which, by the way, gets my butt in trouble ALL the time. I'm still giggling! Stop by and see me, I have some toothpaste to give you for your flight back home!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
Yummy! Now this place, and the prompt for the contest due July first, is "write" up my poetic alley! I saw your ad, and thought I would just drop by and check it all out! I am a drama queen from birth. lol A great inspirational place for a forum! I can't get my fingers movin fast enough for this contest!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
Neat! This looks like a really fun activity! I think I shall jump right on in, and see if I have brains enough to try and figure it out! So, here goes the newbie kid on the block, heading into unknown waters! Wish me luck, I'm gonna need it!!!!!! lol
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER WAY
WOW. If I ever get the time, or when I don't have a six year old yakkin in my ear, I would love to browse through your awesome collection, for I am a sig freak! It looks like it took you quite some time to gather up this lil group of gems! This looks like Santa's workshop! lol
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
HEEHEEHEE THIS WAS JUST WAY TOO MUCH FUN! I could do these lil gems all day and all of the night! And, the other responses from people are just HEELARIOUS!!!! What an awesome activity this is! FUN, FUN, FUN wE MUST HAVE MORE!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
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