This is a really nice interactive, it has a ton of chapters, which automatically draws both submitters and readers to it; as opposed to those low chaptered stories. I really like the raw number of options in the story, ensuring maximum satisfaction to all readers, who have as many different kinks as there are stars in the sky.
This is quite a nice piece of literature. I really like your style, which is smoother than most of the submissions on writing.com, and I enjoy your idea of changing a very well known story. It vaguely reminds me of Wicked, which is a very very good thing.
This is my favorite story, and not to mention my favorite chapter "Forever Changed" I have no idea why, but I really love that chapter. Please please please PLEASE update this a lot, and soon. Hopefully you enjoy writing this story as much as I enjoy reading it. And finally, THANK YOU!
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