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Review of Lost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The title and the description of the story captured me from the start simply because I wanted to see a new perspective. I love how you go straight into the story because it captured my interest right away. And also the metaphors and descriptions kept my interest throughout. However, I can't tell if your spelling and grammatical mistakes were intentional or not, some may like it, I liked the mistakes, and some may not, a part of me did not like it at first. However, the order of the story and descriptions were very captivating.
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Review of Knock First  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
One of the many great metaphors in writing is the comparison of the heart to an object, in my opinion. By comparing the heart to a door, the reader not only visualizes the heart as a doorway, but the reader feels their heart opening and closing. Using words such as "barge in" affects the reader's perception about their relationship, in this case my relationship. I can feel these words because I can relate to them. And, because the Poem is short and easy to read, I can feel the words even more, as if I were to feel a groove within a song.
The three lines,"Leave me never... For now my Heart's door has...Closed once again" was my favorite line and hit me right through the heart. This is the best poem I have ever read in a while and I shall keep this close to my heart.
There is so much to like about this short piece, I feel as if there is a certain "glow" about it that makes it so special.
Thank you for making this poem, keep writing because it motivates me to write as well.
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