Greetings {Jay O Toole: }! I am sending you a review of your story, {The Warm and Fuzzy Blanket : }. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
FIRST IMPRESSION:
I was taken in from the first sentence. I got the impression this was autobiographical. If I am incorrect you successful brought the characters to life . Bravo!
WHAT WORKED:
"The amazing thing about living with a depressed person," Lovely intoned, "is that there can be moments of clarity, and not just clarity, but hyper-clarity. It's like dad thinks,...deeply,...at parts of his vegetative states because that is all he can do."
OVERALL IMPRESSION:
I was engaged from the beginning and found myself wanting to know more . great Job.
I was moved by your story . I feel sorry for your loss .
I was especially taken in by this part.
Little Cousin Isaac Lee Baggs, Jr., I will remember the day God called you home
But more than that, I will remember you in my living room doing the Isaac dance
I felt I knew this person and I could just see the Isaac dance.
Very well written . Thanks for sharing.
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