That was a very good chain of events that both got me hooked and excited for what was to come. While i did notice a few typos here and there it did not hinder my appreciation for you and that tasty dishes storytelling prowess.
Is there anything else you two have collaborated on? Because as stated before i really enjoyed the plotline through to the epilogue.
(very nice addition that i don't see very often)
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