What a wonderful and positive writing. There is much to be said for everything you have written here.It is all true and very helpful information.It is an encouraging source of knowledge and information. Now to put it to work in real time! I really enjoyed this read and I wish you great success in all your writing experiences.
I love this poem.Truth is the standard it leans upon.and it reminded me briefly of a verse in Exodus when God said unto Moses, I AM THAT I AM: and he said, Thus shalt thou say unto the children of Israel, I AM hath sent me unto you.
So truly written as your first line says: "I am the light of all that is." Good read!
This sounds like a Bloody Mary to me. Oh it could be something else but In the past I have found all of the words to this poem to be True! Good form and describes the drink very well, if indeed it was written about that Tomato and Vodka solution. :) .You have captured much in very few words. Good read!
I have to say I was mesmerized with this story. I had to keep reading to find the plot of the story. The Characters changed changed personalities a few times, and my empathy crossed between Harvey and Helen a couple of times. Only near the end of the story did I realize that Fiona/ Helen, had the problem and not Harvey. I think this story is well written and intriguing. I noticed you have a sister story with Harvey's side of the story. I haven't read that yet but I plan to soon. I enjoyed the read and look forward to more. My favorite line in the story and revealing: "Is that you Fiona"? the tale- tell sign of a the personality disorder/s. a good read!
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