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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the fact that you went with a mirrored acrostic. I thought your imagery was really dark (in a good way), especially the last stanza. You succeeding in making me not only believe but feel your pain.

My only criticism, and it is a minor one, is that I think you do not need the commas bracketing 'hauntingly' in the first stanza.
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